Wednesday, March 31, 2021

Petals Comments

Rating: 4.7

Circle of petals
Hypnotizing eyes
Dancing by the wind
But...
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Unwritten Soul
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M.J. Lemon 10 July 2024

Brilliant, Soul! Identity and awareness are like flowers and petals. There is no permanence. Things come and go quickly. The seasons bring change--revival and rest. Ask 'what defines your life' and the answer is likely to change as suddenly as petals and flowers come and go. Brilliant!

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Thembekile Ntshangase 10 November 2021

Beautiful writing

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Anjandev Roy 03 October 2021

This is an outstanding piece....thank u, dear poet.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 11 April 2021

Magnificent write and thought provoking Big Soul.

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