Saturday, June 14, 2014

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Sitting by a river,
sitting by a tree
seeing in the water,
reflections of me.
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Penni Currie
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Colleen Courtney 14 June 2014

Aww...really like this poem. Has a nice flow to it and love all the feeling and emotions it evokes. How sad it is but also true how sometimes the one thing we want and think will make US happy is the one thing that might be holding that other person back from doing what they need to do to find what makes THEM happy. Nicely written piece!

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