Saturday, June 9, 2012

Petals Comments

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I will meet you one day
walking on petals
where shadow no longer penetrates
the walls of tomorrow
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Kasia Fedyk
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I shall stare straight into your Eyes cleansed of remorse and regret I shall offer my feeble withering self for one embrace that shall outlive eternity

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 12 June 2012

walking on petals where shadow no longer penetrates the walls of tomorrow the smile of today the light of tomorrow let u carry... NAMASTE.....

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Simon Collins 09 June 2012

Nice ethereal vision Kasia

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Sharad Juneja 09 June 2012

Now this is a treat to read... a lovely write by a lovely poetess

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Raja Nosherwan 09 June 2012

I read of another time and place through this poem, a vivid vision. I felt as if the words had caressed my soul without me even knowing how. Love it.

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