Petals Comments

very beautifully written poem.i am feeling garden and morning bliss around me

Very good! ! ! ! The rhyme scheme was good aswell. It was beautifully worded.

Petals of any flower in a garden is soft to the touch and look lovely when exposed to the gentle morning sun rays displaying their loveliness to honey hunters. I love the rhyming and were carefully chosen. Thumbs up.

This poem is a rose among the thorns. I love your style 10+++++

Interesting, the life of a flower.: ] Very pretty +10

The life cycle of the flower beautifully depicted by you, 10 Lynda xx

A beautiful poem...I could almost see the flower before my eyes in all the stages you mentioned. Also it reminded be of our life cycle... from birth to youth to adulthood, old age and death. Very interesting.

the beauty of the flower, its strength in the ground rising to the sun, in leaps and bounds. gr8t write

Wonderful poem You seem to know how to capture the very thought of something so striking, gental, and beautiful. and yet it still can be destroyed. It kinds of reminds me of humans, of our existance. Brilliant

wow! what a praxis of life you interwoven....the stream of thought....guide every feeling of realization capture my distress....a beautiful poem of life a 10 +++

Thoughtful writting. It is writen well.

Nice and short and well well written. I like the rhythm in them.10

Delightful poems written with verve and flair. The rhyme and rhythm worked so well too! 10 Karin Anderson

i loved the rhymes, rhythm and message.

Lovely little poems, so light and sweet. Ruth

Aw! That's basically all I can say about this. :)

absolutely beautiful. creates such wonderful pictures. Good job

Pretty poem. Good job. ^^

I absolutely love it :) Good Job!

I love the style and the form, it gives me an idea to make one like this, thanks for inviting me to read your poem. will you also read mine and comments too? thanks.