Thursday, September 6, 2007

Petals Comments

Rating: 5.0

The petals float downwards
Into the drifting river onwards
Farther and farther out of reach
And I cry silently as they leave
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Alison Cassidy 07 September 2007

This is a most evocative piece with a flowing rhythm that enhances its melancholy. Bitter/sweet beauty. love, Allie xxxx

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