Wednesday, October 21, 2009

Petaled Perfection. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Cupped in greenery,
......................... it stands tall as 'itself'.
Bud-tight, becoming unfurled
................................. with blushy show,
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Fay Slimm
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Sandra Martyres 25 October 2009

Truly awesome...I too can see the perfect rose before me...10+++

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Georgia Girl 21 October 2009

Gorgeous! ! I can see the rose right in front of me, beautiful descriptions...10

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Bob Gibson 21 October 2009

Colours blended, from dawns first light hues of yellow and orange delight its perfume, inhaled, garnished with love all senses on fire, a gift from above

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Tom Balch 21 October 2009

Lovely work Fay, has to be a ten,10/10 regards Tom

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Carol Gall 21 October 2009

the beauty of your words holds me with awe 10

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Catrina Heart 21 October 2009

Your last verse says it all..lovely written poem! ! ! Thanks...........

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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