Perverse Comments

ARH! ! Leave it be, wise move.really great piece.

Oh how it hurts to love someone or fall in love with someone you can't be with. Very nicely written.

love yet seems wistful hiding the faith beneath the clouds heart still flows mind yet restrains the glow eyes when pierce the shadow of the faith.................love intense befuddled, holding the the room of reason, excellent write,10*, thanks for sharing

I thought it was very sensuous poetry you wrote quoting the word perverse, but it was a lighter version of obsession about sensuality.... the lit of being in love like that of a teenage girl! Sweet romantic poem...I liked it! High marks.

Unless you have other ulterior motives? Perverse seems more 'obsessive'. I enjoy this. It adds another 'twist' to perversiveness.

My kind of perverse seems different then yours but you would need a week with me to find out, however your poem is well constructed well written And suitable for children And that is importent especially on this site Regards AJS

A perverse love has the feeling of guilt with itself. Is there anything normal in love? Nothing. The true uncanny element is towards our intimate story. Some elements hurt us because we don't feel 'ours' themselves. If they really were ours, we'd accept them better. Though a little perverses.

Why quit that stubborn love? If you love dearly it doesn't bother...just kidding.. nicely written verse...keep up your good work... Best Wishes, Ency Bearis