Saturday, August 18, 2018

Perspire Ere Ye Get Inspired Comments

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And struggling I was from early morn,
Before the birds ventured out a singing,
Somnolent and tired still the yawning dawn,
Over anxious to get some opening,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Savita Tyagi 08 September 2018

Beautiful sonnet. Real trouble is in bag when Desire To perspire expires. It’s a pleasure to read your poetry.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 August 2018

Aniruddha, such a fine sonnet....10+++

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Aniruddha Pathak 20 August 2018

Thank you Bernard for your encouragement. I've read a few of your poems, especially one on love, and really liked. They have a striking appeal. Regards

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