~ Perspicacité ~ Comments

You are very originalistic with your word play here, very good poem.

Clever couplet in conclusion to a series of observatory functions of similar word endings.We are left in no doubt as to the importance of insight.10.

Very original, the use of insight and sight. What a wonderful play of insight and yet keeping the reader so totally engrossed from start to finish. You have such a way to write with your own spirit and originality. Impressed.

Very clever and original thinking, Niv. Lovely use of language.

Aerial-sight Panoramic-sight Are but Shot-sight Short-sight..nicely presented.....10 Short of sight Always dark and no light no love but only hatred To dooms day it may lead

keen vision, the MOTHER of all invention! ! You have done well. Its every poet dream to have those tools to work with. So as a reminder, i'll be putting up this list on my wall. Thanks for sharing. a+++

Besides all sights, there is a seen which always reflects in a mirror lives inside us! This poem reflects the same thoughts nicely...

wait...aaaa....circum-sight.....(POK...hehehehehehhe) ...hmmm, i just wanted to say thanks for ur new abbrev..GOK....POK....lavs ya dear, GOK.....smileeeee

that's very nice! you didn't tell me is this way of writing from your innovations? thanks for sharing

a nice array of worded lights...well lit... a twilight zone poem...10

Beautiful poetry. Well penned Enjoyed reading it 10+

Go ahead mention all sights that you know but I like sightseeing, more places to see and enjoy. Nice thinkin', Nivedita.

All the external sights finally lead to the internal insight. Good.

Smart poem Niv......Can we be delighted with what we find when we look inside insight? It could be a lot of heard work for some, having to face up to their feelings and acceptance of their personalities or........i think.........but it is worth the effort....

yet being centripetal i need to know insight everything seems to slither by centro-sight, , , , , smile, wonderful, yet insightful 10++, thanks for sharing

a very fine play on words - shot sight short sight, and insight to sew them all into a piece.

Great poetry…got some sight to enjoy Insight…what is indeed enlightening thro’ Delight Enjoyed and thanks Poet 10+ Dr. V.

Sight full and Blindness are …skin-deep conception… But Insight and other sights are unfathomable deep…who can reach there [Sancturize] ’Discovers Delight’. Poet is speaking of interiorization…withdrawing from outside to inside…nicely done 10+++ AB London

Fore- Hind- circum- collateral- panoramic-sights are short sighted. the ultimate sights are viewed from within[ not snap shots] without. I like this poem Niv giving it a 10 { altho it does not register on PH]

‘Insight ultimately reins Else finally resigns’ Lofty idea with fine wording! 10+ PO PO PS Insight Sanitizes