Persistence Comments

A concise and inspirational piece written in verse with rhythmic splendour. Well conceived and nicely crafted in persuasive poetic expressions with artistic brilliance. A work of an intricate mind.

Heartfelt gratitude to both of you. Stay blessed.

Life the stage name of struggle so many injustice there are though apparently justice comes but many times as JUST + ICE many peoples struggle much but successful shining sun never rises in their planet invisible eclipse destroys all dreams of realistic life yet the true hands of hard workers importunate after the shining sun to win........

midnight -a meaningful metaphor that sums up all /fine