Saturday, November 23, 2019

Persevere Comments

Rating: 5.0

With every breath I take,
I fall a million miles.
I'll climb up and persevere,
Overcome all life's trials.
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Shaun Cronick
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 23 November 2019

Succinct yet compendious...Virtually flawless structural movement.Well done...[FjR; 19]

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Shaun Cronick 04 April 2020

Thank you Frank for your most generous and warmly welcomed comment sir. Any praise from a world-class poet is for me more valuable than gold. Take care Frank stay healthy. And I wish you well.

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