Wednesday, March 22, 2006

Persephone's Gift Comments

Rating: 4.8

Equinox passed: (a pause so slight
if you blink you could miss it entirely.)
Persephone has not yet returned to Demeter:
Hades is frozen with grief at her leaving,
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Hugh Cobb
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Anna Russell 02 April 2006

It is thanks to wonderful work like this that these stories never lose their powers of enchantment. I liked your concern for Persephone too - I feel her pain is often overlooked in favour of her mothers. Amazing poem, Hugh, well done. Hugs Anna xxx

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kskdnj sajn 24 March 2006

It is those that visit the underworld..that can re-serface with new perspectives and enrichment. Hugh this poem was educational, unique and original, not one cliche, creative, and godly exciting with mythstery..lol.. Truly a fantastic poem. :)

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Gina Onyemaechi 23 March 2006

Entrancing writing, Hughy. As a child, I was absolutely fascinated by mythical stories. Your poem here has succeeded in re-awakening this very sense of fascination in me. Thank you, then. With warmth, Gina.

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