Sunday, July 12, 2009

Perplexity Comments

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The smell of incense sticks
Fills up my room
As I sit in a corner
In tears and gloom…
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Rituparna Choudhury
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Wow...that was awesome. Fantastic comparison used with a good poetic sense... But it would be better if u would 've used some poetic devices to make a perfect poem... But then also i wud like to give u a 10... :)

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Catrina Heart 12 July 2009

beautiful poem written.......nice imagery and diction. Thanks! ! ! 10

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