Wow...that was awesome. Fantastic comparison used with a good poetic sense...
But it would be better if u would 've used some poetic devices to make a perfect poem...
But then also i wud like to give u a 10... :)
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Wow...that was awesome. Fantastic comparison used with a good poetic sense... But it would be better if u would 've used some poetic devices to make a perfect poem... But then also i wud like to give u a 10... :)