Perpetuality Comments

The sky burning is never done- genius line! I cast the million stars out, upon the naked sea, while in a blue flame I wait for their return home to me- lyric music to the ears. Your poem is so touchable and present, but includes immensity inside it too.

I love all this poem is about....a million stars, thunder/lightning bolts, all of Nature at her finest~ Beautiful!

I loved this here poem Smoky, with the mention of all the things I love....The stars, lightning bolts, all of Nature in her beauty........and all she has to give.

Indeed beautiful poem. Combination of a lot of things. Very well written.

A very beautiful poem.