Tuesday, July 28, 2009

Perpetual Fire Comments

Rating: 5.0

They say it shall fade as a long winter day
Why does it depart leaving my world so gray
A feeling from within is my mind so wrong
Recalling one sonnet such a splendorous song
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Jasmine Wayne
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Darlene Belcher 28 July 2009

This is a very touching poem. You are truely amazing with words.

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