Sunday, May 21, 2006

Perpetual Emotions Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lovingly she caresses the man beneath her,
Fingers gently dancing across his chest,
Swirls and twirls traced along his skin.
‘Neath the moonlight, plays this scene.
...
Read full text

Hanna Collins
COMMENTS
Leigh A. Hill 19 June 2006

what an amazing poem! you compared the two things in a way in i have never thought of before! amazing, love starr

0 0 Reply
Dustin Bennefield 23 May 2006

well I see that you are starting as a good writer already good job

0 0 Reply
Tracey Collins 21 May 2006

that is so true, men do take all the scratching, from us ladys.

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success