Wednesday, September 16, 2009

Perpetual Being Comments

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Sing me a song
a song
of you and me
of how
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Giselle Joseph
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Jean Dament 16 September 2009

I enjoyed how you described so well a perpetual being within your poem. a note-'the lonely sticken'-shouldn't that be 'the lonely stricken? '

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