Monday, November 5, 2007

Perpendicular Comments

Rating: 2.8

When under the affluence of inkerhol,
The body is inclined to fall,
Or react in the most amazing way.
So if you are down, just stay there, I’d say.
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Irene C S ClarkHogg
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Ben Gieske 04 August 2009

You are brilliant mixing so many unusuals with commonalities.

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This piece was underrated. Good poetry,

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Bob Gibson 11 January 2009

On all fours you climb the stair your shoes are lost, your wallets bare the room spins round, then you chunder the slightest noise it sounds like thunder been there done that, got the tee shirt! regards Bob

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