Permanent Peace Comments

I love this poem...it is like a breeze of fresh air.Great write!

Interesting, the minimalistic approach; poignant the appeal for peace

yes dear poet. i too think the same. we are living in calculations... in seconds, past, or future, living in dreams or plans. we r not here in life, in breath, or actually not always. if it is true, it is breath that is suffering alone? v should live our breath... and the POEM... I feel, the short lines and messages are near to a silence. For the reader, it must to read between the line, see what the PAUSE is. Or, it is also possible that i cant approch your theme n thoughts, but i tried and i like this poem. Peace...

Very thoughtful poem..Thank you...

Swimming in the sea of spiritualistic silence!

If only hey, good write.

You did it? Great cools

Wouldn't that be very wonderful if Permanent peace Arise could really arise? Well done!

Nice wish for the time

permanent peace arise. this is what the world is in need of good write

Brevity of words and insightful poetry

OM, Persian Nightingale good to hear from you! Your poem is the seed of the present that agree and breathe permanent Peace. Thanks for sharing....

Lovely read and simplicity.

a very nice write...

ethereal... beautiful...

i can feel the peace already, hope we all awaken

Simple, serene and soulful spanning.

Simple, serene and soulful spanning.

simple with big meaning, good thinking to get permanent peace

Very simple and sweet expression. You are from great country like IRAN. Its a country of great poets. Be a great poet.