Sunday, July 16, 2017

Permanence Comments

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In the silence of the breaking dawn
A clangor of voices incessantly echoed
Dwelt over fancies of the truth and nay fawn
Hath these feelings rest on a place of abode
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Carmina Abrenica
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Dr Antony Theodore 16 July 2017

A clangor of voices incessantly echoed In the affluence of your mind, will adieu ever linger? asting sojourn? silence of the breaking dusk serene perpetuity very fine coinage of words together to express exquisite beauty. Great imagination. very expressive poem. Loved to read it. Thank you dear poetess. tony

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Carmina Abrenica 08 February 2018

Thank you. ☺

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