Peripheral Beauty Comments

A THING OF BEAUTY IS A JOY FOR EVER - John Keats. I like your style of written, you captured the beauty of your subject very well. A lovely romantic poem subtly penned. Thanks for sharing and remain blessed.

‘Peripheral became Central …poetically culminated into Eternal’...envy your 'Lady Luck' Sir lolol Excellent diction Sir Voted 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK PS Cordially invite to my page and grace by yopur comments if you please…Sir n

words as beautiful as the inspiration must have been, wonderful piece!

wow... breathtaking she was a beautiful lady.

Peripheral Beauty...If you can capture this much beauty with your peripheral vision i just simply wonder if beauty is really a language of vision.I loved your words arrangement with each line.10++++

beautifully described in all ways! a great poem

Detailed description of amazing creature in your point of view. the way you described, showed how you admire her. with your so nice chosen words, very interesting. Wish to share how to write a better poem as you do. Thanks

I enjoyed reading this, amazing poem..10

your Imagination is working very well/ what a beautiful Description! ! ! Thanks For Sharing!

this poem is amazing it is wrote so nicely it is simply amazing you described how two people meet and there souls instantly connect and they are soul mates for life love to see more poems from you thank you for the invatation

this is really good i like ur work thanx for the invitation

your poem is very nice i liked it.... thanks for your invitation and keep writing.. :)

im very much sure you were in the moderm trends.....oh well the poem not bad though.....anyways when a man attracted to a woman everything he will comes out to his mouth all sweetness and remarkable words..which is absulate shows to your poet...keep writing....

i really enjoyed reading this poem i look forward on reading more!

amazing poem. beautiful imagery. loved it

Lovely descriptions. The reader cant help but fall in love with the lady of your imagination.

The peripheral beauty is well exposed in every line of this poem.

i loved this peice and the part ' like a mermaid in the deep blue sea' there is an expression people use 'there's plenty of fish in the sea' But, I say why have fish when you can have a mermaid! LOL ((May be it was me you saw!)) LOL LOL Beautiful peice Lee

Thanks for this one reminding me of my own younger time. Nice imagery a 10 +

A beautiful poem of 'Peripheral Beauty' vividly seen and described by an eloquent writer.Thanks for sharing.