Thursday, December 6, 2007

Perhaps This Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

A snowball on the ground, I have found, perfectly round,
created maybe by small hands, it stands and thus commands,
me to scoop it up and toss it across the cosmos.
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Ernestine Northover
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Andrew Blakemore 02 May 2009

Another wintery scene depicted so well by you Ernestine, you are one talented lady. Love, Andrew xx

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Alison Cassidy 07 December 2007

A metaphor for 'if at first you don't succeed, try, try again', your sensitively drawn poem carries me to the other side of the globe with its wintry images of childhood and its warm heart. Beautiful penning from a fine poet. love, Allie xxxx

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Duncan Wyllie 06 December 2007

Dear Ernestine The first part of this poem is so sad, and the rest is so true, each flake perfect in design and yet just as us, no two the same Wonderful writing again from you Take care Love duncan X

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 06 December 2007

'Perhaps this Time' I will find the time to enjoy Wintertime. Nice. Very nice, Ernestine.

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