Saturday, November 23, 2013

Perhaps This Is Love.. Comments

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Perhaps this is love.
I can’t speak about you,
But when alone,
Your thought throngs
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Neela Nath Das
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Heather Wilkins 03 December 2013

perhaps this is love. think so lovely write. enjoyed

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Tribhawan Kaul 01 December 2013

Well composed. Last lines gives a meaning to entire poem.

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Neela Nath Das 29 November 2013

Thanks a lot Sir.To denote the stoic nature of the narrator the reference of trees meadows have been brought.The love of lower heaven ends with mark of exclamation.Here lies the confusion of his/her mind. I thought like this when I wrote.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 29 November 2013

The love of lower heaven! I think this defines the kind of love described. A tree or a meadow may not understand. Thank you.

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Sandra Regan 25 November 2013

I LOVE poems about love. Great one! Please read: So High

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Sekharan Pookkat 23 November 2013

Rivers and Mountains Hills and valleys Meadows and loans Stars and sky sea and waves fills up love in mind and soul

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