Perhaps Comments

simply charming. words of what could have been or could still be. perhaps, if... certain aspects were in order. perhaps, if... the stars were aligned accurately. words so thought provoking and daydreamy.

We hide our feelings to protect our heart. Once hurt...once burned...with no desire to touch that fateful flame again... Hugs, Dee

wonderful luminous write

I'll need another placement Perhaps, one next to you. The reader of this poemed soul The heart it is written to. You want to be next to 'that' reader of this poemed soul, perhaps - you pour out your heart to this soul, perhaps it's the heart it is written to - yes indeed, that's a new placement. Perhaps. This left my eyes unblinking, searching. This is good, good, very good. When you open up your poem for voting, perhaps, so your soul won't be next to the wrong heart, you will get a 10 from me.

Very enigmatic expression...too good. sathya narayana

'Perhaps', after reading this wonderful trip you went on, many more out there will feel how connected we all really are... I get this, I really do & perhaps I should be so brave as to post a similar write I did last Wednesday night... after I cooked for two :)

It is an interesting script, a soul’s inquisitiveness to find an answer which seems evading. poetic from beginning to end.. fine, graceful work. Rema

nice poem... i like it... keep writing... ur writing is inspiring and i hope you will do more...

That was nice it flowed nicely like Ernestine Northover said. 'super write'

Yummy! ! ! ! ! this is absolutely lovely. Again the flow is great and there is a bit of poignancy escaping from the lines. Super write. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

That's a really good poem..

that was a really good poem i enjoyed reading it! Hazel G.E

Reads as good as any poem I've read....

Ah just perhaps, from the heart Green,

Did enjoy that had a nice flow and felt easy with it thanks Chris 10

This is from deep heart of the poet.........Interesting and intriguing Words are nicely placed.............but very ambiguos and difficult to comprehend good work, my 10

I loved the third stanza...nicely done

Hello GW Lovely poem! ...Straight from the heart! Dorothy

I found the last stanza most enjoyable, a very clever ending that really made the poem for me.

A touch of sadness but a GREAT write as always! ! ! *10*! ! Best regards GW - Friend Thad