Tuesday, February 12, 2008

Perhaps Comments

Rating: 4.9

I took a trip last weekend
And you were at my side.
Perhaps, you never thought of me.
What feelings did I hide?
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GREENWOLFE 1962
COMMENTS
Cristy Upshaw 09 June 2009

simply charming. words of what could have been or could still be. perhaps, if... certain aspects were in order. perhaps, if... the stars were aligned accurately. words so thought provoking and daydreamy.

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Dee Daffodil 15 August 2008

We hide our feelings to protect our heart. Once hurt...once burned...with no desire to touch that fateful flame again... Hugs, Dee

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Chitra - 02 August 2008

wonderful luminous write

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Mark Nwagwu 22 July 2008

I'll need another placement Perhaps, one next to you. The reader of this poemed soul The heart it is written to. You want to be next to 'that' reader of this poemed soul, perhaps - you pour out your heart to this soul, perhaps it's the heart it is written to - yes indeed, that's a new placement. Perhaps. This left my eyes unblinking, searching. This is good, good, very good. When you open up your poem for voting, perhaps, so your soul won't be next to the wrong heart, you will get a 10 from me.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 22 July 2008

Very enigmatic expression...too good. sathya narayana

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Tia Maria 22 July 2008

'Perhaps', after reading this wonderful trip you went on, many more out there will feel how connected we all really are... I get this, I really do & perhaps I should be so brave as to post a similar write I did last Wednesday night... after I cooked for two :)

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Rema Prasanna 21 July 2008

It is an interesting script, a soul’s inquisitiveness to find an answer which seems evading. poetic from beginning to end.. fine, graceful work. Rema

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nice poem... i like it... keep writing... ur writing is inspiring and i hope you will do more...

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Rachel Smailliw 21 July 2008

That was nice it flowed nicely like Ernestine Northover said. 'super write'

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Ernestine Northover 21 July 2008

Yummy! ! ! ! ! this is absolutely lovely. Again the flow is great and there is a bit of poignancy escaping from the lines. Super write. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Shawn Johnson 21 July 2008

That's a really good poem..

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Evaughn Gray 21 July 2008

that was a really good poem i enjoyed reading it! Hazel G.E

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Ted Sheridan 20 July 2008

Reads as good as any poem I've read....

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Patricia Gale 19 July 2008

Ah just perhaps, from the heart Green,

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Broken Peaces 18 June 2008

Did enjoy that had a nice flow and felt easy with it thanks Chris 10

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 07 June 2008

This is from deep heart of the poet.........Interesting and intriguing Words are nicely placed.............but very ambiguos and difficult to comprehend good work, my 10

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Viola Grey 09 May 2008

I loved the third stanza...nicely done

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 18 April 2008

Hello GW Lovely poem! ...Straight from the heart! Dorothy

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Wes Thompson 12 March 2008

I found the last stanza most enjoyable, a very clever ending that really made the poem for me.

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Thad Wilk 25 February 2008

A touch of sadness but a GREAT write as always! ! ! *10*! ! Best regards GW - Friend Thad

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