Monday, May 22, 2006

Perfume 'Alarm' Comments

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As she walked through the door
the perfume filled the room
everyone turned their head
how could they ignore
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David Darbyshire
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Francesca Johnson 24 May 2006

A little dab of something classy behind the ear works well for me. But I had a good laugh at this poem - I can imagine your lady with something cheap and cheerful splashed liberally all over her, and the reaction of others! Love, Fran xx

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Esther Leclerc 22 May 2006

Omigosh, I hear you loud n' clear and I'm smelling her from here! ... Why, why, why do women (and not a few men!) wear their scent so 'loudly'? ? ? Gag... Why wear perfume when the scent of clean(ish) skin is the best nature has to offer? ! Cute poem, Dave!

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Patricia Gale 22 May 2006

Funny Dave, good one! Patricia

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Goldy Locks 22 May 2006

hahah. David, very good comic relief write.

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