Thursday, February 19, 2009

Perfectly Imperfect Comments

Rating: 4.5

her long hair strong and black
rests gently on the center of her back
the luminosity of her perfect smile echoes in the distance
when I first met her I loved her at that instant
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Romel Davis
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Mizz.BabyGirl Brown 02 October 2009

i just added this to my MyPoemList 'star struck and lost in a daze I halted in admiration, stunned and amazed' was my favorite part and i love the word 'luminosity'

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