There is a breakneck competition
To be decorated as good or great
With some self maneuvered projected traits
Synchronous moves are made asynchronous
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If you don't meet their egos right/Poisonous canines are ready to bark and bite....wonderful expression! An excellent work with a befitting title dear poet.....................10
They dwindle between symmetry and asymmetry Unwittingly confused by amplified magnanimity In quest for perfection they lose their mental sanity you play with contrasts dear poet. a masterly technique. this is the best poem among those which you have published if i am not mistaken. thank u dear poet. tony.
A refined poetic imagination, Dr. Sachidananda. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
Very powerfully and moving brought forth - a thought provoking rendition.