Sunday, December 28, 2008

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I tiptoe around each crack so I don't fall.
But lately it's just been taking me further down.
I've lost myself.
It's at the bottom of the hole.
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Briana Johnston
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Amy Douglass (Fifita) 29 December 2008

I like how this poem says that your not perfect, no one is. This poem is saying how it's ok not to be perfect and how we can always improve. Good message, Nice one. :)

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