Sunday, October 21, 2007

Perfectly Displayed Comments

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A dusting of white, like icing sugar, coats the dry cold ground.
Such crisp, sharp layers of frost, which as yet the sun’s not found.
So fresh and clean, an early sparkling welcome to the day,
Along with bracing breezes that bring shivers into play.
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Ernestine Northover
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Andrew Blakemore 02 May 2009

A winter's scene so wonderfully described by your magical words. Love, Andrew xx

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Thad Wilk 21 October 2007

Hi Ernestine! ! Your poem Perfectly Displayed was displayed perfectly! You can feel every word as it flows through as only could be; described by you! (10) ! Thad

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Meggie Gultiano 21 October 2007

Perfectly displayed words and i really enjoy this.. love, Meggie

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I love this, lovely Ernestine! The imagery makes me giddy as a school girl! Well done.

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Duncan Wyllie 21 October 2007

Soothing tale of enchantment and beauty, , , sometimes it's so good to see that somethings don't change.....Brilliant! ! Love duncan x

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From your first line you had me entranced. t x

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