Friday, May 9, 2008

Perfection Corrupts Comments

Rating: 5.0

There once was a perfect li'l town,
where morals and standards were sound,
But the strong were protected,
and the weak just neglected,
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Rachel Slimm
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Yes. A gem, and an unfortunately realistic one. t x

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LOVEFOOL Aka 09 May 2008

Nice poem with good sense funny as well Thanks Nik

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Rachel Slimm

Rachel Slimm

Hayle, Cornwall
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