Monday, April 19, 2010

Perfection Comments

Rating: 3.1

Burning passion to succeed
Pushes one face to face
With the flower without flaws
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Eyan Desir
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Kesav Easwaran 02 May 2010

God, flower and its perfection...nice concept...good write...10

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Nathan Chilton 27 April 2010

This is a wonderful piece of work well done 10+ love and light nathan cx

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Marieta Maglas 23 April 2010

A finely penned poem, . Captured delightfully! Thank you for sharing!

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Kranthi Pothineni 21 April 2010

This lines came into my mind after reading your poem...“The thing that is really hard, and really amazing, is giving up on being perfect and beginning the work of becoming yourself.”

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Summer Holst 20 April 2010

well written and has reality written in every phrase. great job and don't ever stop writing. youre amazing :)

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Lady Grace 19 April 2010

nicely done...no one is perfect, u r right...this piece is nice..

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Eyan Desir 19 April 2010

The poem is written against my life experiences In work, sport, love and etc.. I have never been perfect... Others on this site have told me they have reach this level...... the poem don't pertain to them...

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