Burning passion to succeed
Pushes one face to face
With the flower without flaws
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This is a wonderful piece of work well done 10+ love and light nathan cx
A finely penned poem, . Captured delightfully! Thank you for sharing!
This lines came into my mind after reading your poem...“The thing that is really hard, and really amazing, is giving up on being perfect and beginning the work of becoming yourself.”
well written and has reality written in every phrase. great job and don't ever stop writing. youre amazing :)
nicely done...no one is perfect, u r right...this piece is nice..
The poem is written against my life experiences In work, sport, love and etc.. I have never been perfect... Others on this site have told me they have reach this level...... the poem don't pertain to them...
God, flower and its perfection...nice concept...good write...10