Friday, November 24, 2017

Perfection? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Can one attain perfection
In this world,
So full of pain,
Injustice, finely blurred,
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Sandra Feldman
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Laurie Van Der Hart 25 November 2017

If a poem, a song or a work of art Succeeds in reaching someone's heart Communicates its message clear Striking those who read, see or hear I think that we can safely say It was made in a perfect way So many of yours fit into that category, Sandra! Well done on another great poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 November 2017

This world is full of pain and illusion captures mind of a person still with grasping of matters. Beauty of nature is attractive and beauty of life each person should feel. Imagination flies and makes cry and smile both. True beauty is with God and we should love him and remember him ever. Excellent poem! ..10

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