when I look at a bird
in a tree
the first thing
I notice is
...
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I put this poem on PoetrySoup, here's a comment 'that's an interesting thought. Never thought about the bird's colors are within the lines. A nice read.'
Thanks for supporting my work with your words, always appreciated., , , .
Another comment from PoetrySoup - 'It is a great observation and a short and sweet poem.'