Monday, August 7, 2006

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If my world were perfect
And we were all blind
And my love had fallen
Into this state of mind
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Can I Live?
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Asif Andalib 10 October 2008

A wonderful poem. But did you mean, 'My life is short now' by mentioning 'My life is shot now'? Thanks for sharing. A 10 from me.

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Joshua Decker 03 July 2008

very good poem. im sure we have all been there before, though some of us may not of left it.

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