Friday, September 12, 2008

Perfect World Comments

Rating: 2.9

In my perfect world
The sky is a perfect blue
The grass is a soft green
And together are me and you
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Sandra Feldman 13 December 2014

Very wonderful thoughts, very beautifully expressed, In the field that does it best, Poetry.

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Bob Blackwell 25 September 2008

Amy, this is a beautiful poem, with beautiful thoughts too. Very well written a ten from me.

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 21 September 2008

so beautiful...........thanks for sharing 10

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Bill Thomas 21 September 2008

Passionate & sweet - you so must hang on to the depth of feeling you show here.

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Tom Balch 15 September 2008

If only it was true, nice piece regards Tom

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Reshma Ramesh 12 September 2008

hey Amy hope you find your perfect world...........neat work

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Tai Chi Italy 12 September 2008

Awww a sweet; little poem Amy! made me smile becuase that is exactly how the world seems when you are in love....thanks for your romantic muse...Tai

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Miss Lavender 12 September 2008

hi there... a great poem indeed.. it reminds me of Utopia... different ideas related to one big great theme... i loved it...

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