In my perfect world
The sky is a perfect blue
The grass is a soft green
And together are me and you
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Amy, this is a beautiful poem, with beautiful thoughts too. Very well written a ten from me.
Passionate & sweet - you so must hang on to the depth of feeling you show here.
hey Amy hope you find your perfect world...........neat work
Awww a sweet; little poem Amy! made me smile becuase that is exactly how the world seems when you are in love....thanks for your romantic muse...Tai
hi there... a great poem indeed.. it reminds me of Utopia... different ideas related to one big great theme... i loved it...
Very wonderful thoughts, very beautifully expressed, In the field that does it best, Poetry.