Perfect Words Comments

A lovely concept executed quite well. Very good indeed!

Ahh awesome poem! Wow.....the darkness of it...the deep words..just...wow lol you're really good. Deep and dark poems are my faves and you definately caught that. Excellent Job -Tyease

oh my this is a strange one very nice love it keep it up ^_^

Very well composed write, the pain of heart shattering promises that get broken. Nice piece Kellykel..keep this gift going....by writing we reach out and touch the souls of millions...if we can't help ourselves..then others is a must. Best wishes Jon

i wish i could come up with some of yours