Tender skin seized with teeth
magnetic rush, poetic hush,
Little bit of pressure,
Crumbs of love, slight pull,
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A perfect recipe from a master chef.5 star michelin rating for this delicious dish whipped up by the magic of your pen.
Reshma, bits and pieces apparently disjointed held in a caress of love, the perfect ingredients for a poem, like the one you've so marvellously produces herein. Sorry, I hadn't read this earlier. Mark
first i want to say WOW! ! ! ! ! ! this is a special poem to me because it's so...........i cant even explain it.............reshma i cant find the words to express this piece LOL.....because its outstanding..........bravo 1000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000
MMMMMMMM Reshma...now I know why you are a most popular poet...Erotic in the extreme. I would share my apple with you any day, Sid.
In a loving mood, Reshma? *smile* An avid description of a moment in sensual nights and fun days. I especially like the word 'tender'.
lol.....very sensual and vivid write indeed :) thanks for sharing...10+++ rgds asif
this is great i have never read any of your work before and i will be reading more! ! !
A very provocative title. And the content of your poem does not disappoint. Ten for you. As always, Sandra
Very appealing to the senses and creates suspense. I am glad you ended up with a kiss.
Loved this soundbite! Just wow!