Wednesday, July 5, 2006

“ Perfect Moment “ Comments

Rating: 2.9

How I wish
For the perfect moment
To commence
As I sit down here
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Marie Joyce B. Negapatan
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Ruby Root 05 July 2006

Hi Marie Joyce, You write with compassion and sorrow. I feel for you. It is difficult to find someone today. The use of imagery is excellent. You are very descriptive and your form is excellent. The poem is written with sadness. Take care.

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Marie Joyce B. Negapatan

Marie Joyce B. Negapatan

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