Tuesday, May 25, 2010

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Rating: 5.0

Feather light; It sits against a
Background of dust then wood.
It will rise soon with the next breeze,
And what seems like a puff of smoke;
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Way Lenn
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A very thought provoking meditative poem, it reminds me so much of 'Particles Of Dust' and poems I wrote long ago.10+

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Lolly Cotterill 02 June 2010

I love this poem......its simple but you understand its message...x

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