Monday, April 25, 2016

Perfect Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

She wasn't a perfect lady,
ill tempered, with a mind unsteady.
she possessed no ego, neither an attitude,
with no sense of humor and her life almost screwed.
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shrutika kahale
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Edward Kofi Louis 06 May 2016

They loved each other! Thanks for sharing.

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Shrutika Kahale 06 May 2016

yes, thankyou for reading and commenting

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Kajol D 26 April 2016

Just perfect❤

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Shrutika Kahale 26 April 2016

yea, like the title

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Shrutika Kahale 26 April 2016

yea, like the title.

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Tom Billsborough 25 April 2016

Sounds like a couple who have got their priorities right! The couple both come alive because of your sensitive and humorous writing. Must read more of your work after this excellent piece. Tom Billsborough

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Shrutika Kahale 25 April 2016

thankyou so much, my pleasure

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 25 April 2016

Poet's PagePoemsQuotesCommentsStatsSend MessageShare on FacebookShare on Twitter Poems by shrutika kahale: 5 / 5 « prev. poem Perfect Love - Poem by shrutika kahale She wasn't a perfect lady, ill tempered, with a mind unsteady. she possessed no ego, neither an attitude, with no sense of humor and her life almost screwed. yet people loved her, so did she, but a guy loved her to infinity. he never pampered her, never showed her pictures that were blur, he never assured to fetch her moon and stars, never promised to be her Valdemar, never promised to abandon his life for her, never assured to be her knight in shinning armor. all women desired beauty and men, she didn't desire any of it, she was just another dumb, yet another insane, she was herself and quintessential, she never bothered about others, that's what made her special! A brilliant description of a couple in love.. Very beautiful and touchy...I would love to read it again and again. It deserves 10. Thanks dear poet. Subhas

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Shrutika Kahale 25 April 2016

thankyou, well its just imagination, but thankyou so much!

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