Thursday, July 22, 2010

Perfect Lie/ You Are Loved The Way You Are Comments

Rating: 4.7

Stand in front of the mirror
Either boys or girls, some got depression
Try to find yourself underneath the reflection
Dissect each point, seek for perfection
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Anjandev Roy 08 March 2020

Excellent piece, as usual. anjandev roy.

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Mahtab Bangalee 04 March 2020

really a good poem and didactic note

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Mahtab Bangalee 04 March 2020

the theme there is hidden the true self when I seek myself before the mirror oh broken all into pieces the reality cause of mixture the unstable mind where fictitious love for the world lost in the will-o-the wisp so no the bleakly wandering the inside is beautiful more than the thinking find out its true whatever they say yeah either wrong or right

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Castellenas John 12 March 2019

Powerful and wonderful words shared. Great thoughts and wisdom shared.

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Dev Anand 07 August 2018

if u are blessed as jasmine flower Why must you envy of that sunflower I know, it is big, sweet yellow, catchy for eyes to look But, don't you know sunflower adore the way you look? Hypnotize fragrance by cute in white, posses its own hook So unfair to compare the different beauty you both look.....very beautiful and very very poetic. thank u dear poetess. dev

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 March 2018

Amazing poem. One of the most motivational piece I have ever read. The third stanza depicts the reality of life wherein most people rather see what appears outside, always forget what lies inside. Liked the last.stanza, which expresses it all: Perfection, only belongs to God.10

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Ace Of Black Hearts 25 January 2018

Beautiful poem, beauty is never only skin deep unless you let it be. And to compare yourself to others, is never the right thing to do. Personal improvement is best done in mirror. Who am I, how can I be better. Not who is she, what does she have that I do not. Envy can be very difficult to shake for anyone lacking in their own self confidence.

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Simone Inez Harriman 30 August 2017

A poem that encourages us to tap into our inner beauty and realize that we unique and perfect as we are in every way. A lovely uplifting write that speaks to all of us.10+++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 July 2017

Euphemisticlly inscribed with encouraging write. I would like to quote... Most of us rather see what appeared outside always forgot to evaluate what lies inside Most of us deceived by the open eyesight always fooled because blinded heart-sight.... In reality, perfection is only belong to God And...you are always loved the way you are. I appreciate this beautiful poem. Thank you dear Soul, for posting such a gem.

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Richard Wlodarski 25 June 2017

Soul, I like the way that you have interspersed nature with people. Unlike people, nature has no mirrors to look at. Nature is comfortable just the way she is. Unfortunately, most people are not. So sad that so many have such low self-esteem. Another great write! It inspired me to write: Standing in front Of the mirror Seeing that someone Long ago Hugged him said bye And cried no more

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Unwritten Soul 26 June 2017

A beautiful comment, thank you :) and thank you for your lil poem here, this is wonderful and its touching and deep

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Adilson Pinto 24 June 2017

THIS IS A MARVELOUS WAY TO ENCOURAGE SOMEONE! YES WE HAVE TO HAVE SELF-CONFIDENCE, SELF-LOVE, PERSONAL ACCEPTANCE! I FEEL AT THIS MOMENT MORE HAPPY IN BEING WHO I AM! THANKS POET! ! ! STRONG HUG! ! !

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Unwritten Soul 24 June 2017

Thank you for another strong hug, kind words and time My heart always feel like you are a kind fellow, and of course being you as yourself is an award for God because you are different, we all different.. We have a chance to bring ourselves to our best. Comparison between diff greats things are not necessary. Smile, be happy.. That life meant to be! :)

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Mj Lemon 14 June 2017

Wonderful poem, Soul. As I read it a second time, I thought about the power of standing in front of a mirror. The real power has nothing to do with vanity. Done enough, it can make one accustomed to oneself, comfortable with oneself. This alone may be a step towards defeating those efforts that may attack one's self worth. A great poem, Soul.

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Unwritten Soul 14 June 2017

We were born this way, its not a way to blame it is a way to celebrate how unique we are delivered to this world. Strip all the physical entities, we will see we have something to focus on, how to live in survive in life with happiness :) Thank you so much dear, last time i offer you tea..lets try lemonade with mint this time cheers! hahahaha

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Payal Priya 05 June 2017

A beautiful poem asking people to love themselves with their imperfections.You have defly used the images of sunfower and Jasmine to convey the message.Love yourself..whether a jasmine or a sunflower you are beautiful.Loved the poem.Thanks for sharing..☺

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Unwritten Soul 06 June 2017

Hi Payal Priya, because God creates so much great things differently for each person... so let just be thankful to be self and different value...Thank you so much for your words and time :)

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Cheryl Tutaan 24 May 2017

I love myself! ❤ Loved this poem so much...I will add this to my favorite poem. Thank you, Unwritten Soul +++++10

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Unwritten Soul 31 May 2017

Be yourself and yourself is something greatest thing we can honour our life! Always thankful to God because He only creates one design for each soul, even identical twins has some differences! . Thanks for reading dear Cheryl! Thank you for be kind to my work! :)

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Rebecca Navarre 06 November 2016

Beautiful And So SAD! ! ! Very Heart(Felt! ! ! !) Wonderfully Done And Wonderfully Put! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! You Have Big Heart! ! ! ! ! ! ! Beauty Fades, True Beauty Inside, Stays! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! All Beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! ! Yes! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Even when we don't feel so, from others! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Strong Poem! ! ! ! ! Thank You For Sharing! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Unwritten Soul 07 November 2016

Yes Rebecca, i imagined if we only have the same face but with different barcode number on our head (to differentiate each other) will we see each other or treat them differently now? because we will ignore what we see on face/skin but their heart...I always believe that God creates different beauty for each of us, when your heart close to someone, look might be changed, a child look his/her mother beautiful than others because they are close to them..

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Ging Taping 12 September 2016

Nobody is perfect but we are trying to be perfect but still not so keep on trying again..If only people contented of what they/we have but its not it runs in human blood..Each and everyone of us has its own beauty that others have we just need progress to show the world that we are beautiful in our own way...

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Unknown Spirit 25 August 2016

I love your rythmic lines and words. Dear unwritten soul you may belive that everyone has his/her own intrinsic values but perfection naturally arouse the sense of jealousy in which you aspire to be granted with those sublime characteristics. satisfaction abut our possessions lead to life of monotony. perhaps jealoucy and contrasts all in all are created by god to enhance the beauty of human being. we should aquire innovative features of others by resorting to such ways although it may produce a world of tumult within our soul but such mental and emotional disorders expedite the process of growing otherwise we shoul linger forever in ordinary life

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Gholamreza Zarban 26 March 2016

Stand in front of the mirror! Right. That's what most of us need to do sometimes. Thanks...

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Unwritten Soul 27 March 2016

Merci, Loving ourselves is more reflective and mutual than loving others that not really appreciative. I always think that no one is better than another, because it is unfair to compare different qualities created by God :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 December 2015

To be who you are in life! Facing the works of the truth. Nice work.

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Amitava Sur 22 March 2015

A wonderful poem in knowing self and improving self, feeling happy and to be liberated.Don't get diverged being allured by external beckoning.... very nice You may read my poem ENJOY BEING COMPLETE YOU.

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