Thursday, June 29, 2006

Perfect Harmony Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hair ever so lightly flowing
As mother nature blowing kisses
She silently prays to herself while she misses
The only one that she can't seem to get off of her mind
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Kristin Nicole RothDavis
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Duncan Wyllie 04 August 2006

Now this is very sensual, so finely writen, so fragile 'Her scent lingers in the air like a kite.' As do you lovely words Kristen Love duncan XXX

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Ernestine Northover 30 June 2006

A really magnificent poem Kristin, a powerful and moving write. A lovely read which was very inspiring. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Nalini Hebbar 30 June 2006

it had to happen...and then the silence is loud...two hearts in perfect harmony...wow...loved it...loved all the***~~~-'''..., , , ...beautiful...love...nalini

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KRIS...SUPERNALIC FORCES PREVAIL HERE...SOLID IMAGERY AND PROFOUND EXPRESSION MAKES THIS A REAL WINNER... FROM A>R/ ADVENTURE TO ROMANCE, YOU HAVE SUCCEDED IN CAPTURING THIS READER...SUPER JOB! '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK

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Patricia Gale 29 June 2006

Splendid connection, and the way you portrayed it wonderful!

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Kristin Nicole RothDavis

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