Tuesday, December 18, 2012

Perfect Feelings Comments

Rating: 5.0

Let me come close
Wrap my arms around you
Like the wings of a fire dragon
To protect you like treasures
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Jahan Zeb
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Valerie Dohren 05 January 2013

A lovely, gentle poem, expressing much feeling.

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Valerie Dohren 05 January 2013

A lovely, gentle poem, expressing much feeling.

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Payal Parande 19 December 2012

your words flow like melody sir beautiful and bewitching each word doing justice to other no more no less just perfect thank you for sharing sir love payal

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Unwritten Soul 18 December 2012

This make you whole again..it did feel like that right? sound so happy, share with us then haha _Soul

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Gajanan Mishra 18 December 2012

good poem. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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