Wednesday, April 27, 2011

Perfect Engineer Comments

Rating: 4.8

In my younger years, I learned about this perfect engineer
The more I was taught about his works, the more I wanted to hear
Fascinated by the thought that his creations surrounded me everywhere I go
All the things we simply take for granted, little did we know
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Joyce Yifith
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Robert Beck 20 November 2011

Joyce, I believe this is a very creative poem regarding the engineering works of God (Assumed) . Very well written with a great flow of thought and rhyme. Only saw the two poem entries, both are 10's, you should submit more. Regards, Bob

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Joyce Yifith

Joyce Yifith

Colonia, Island of Yap
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