Perfect Betrayal Comments
I met a magician
Amidst the fog by a lake
He lived in a cottage
And had a beard- black.
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Well expressed thoughts and feelings. An insightful creation, very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing, Asavri.
This sounds like a story of toxic love- all encompassing to the point that the woman loses herself and is not strengthened by it, but quite the opposite.
I am not so sure about that, because he went singing that he fell in love with her
I have reread the poem and yes, your interpretation seems more accurate than my first response
@CarlRoussell Yes, he went singing that he fell in love with her, but after making her lose herself. He sang to hide his betrayal. Love would have never allowed him to make her suffer.
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8/3/2025 9:11:24 PM # 1.0.0
So never meet a magician, there will be no betrayal. Cutest composed creation, dear poetess. Very fascinating to read. An ardent story-poem from a passionate poetess, thank you for sharing
Indeed- brought a smile to my face. Thank you so much. Take care. : )