Perception Comments

Love is the deepest motivation to connect the center to the circumference, /// superb expression about love

EXCEPT FOR LAST TWO THREE LINES ALL S BEAUTIFUL...opening of the petals And the withering of flowers; All appears to be false and illusory, Life is a dream and so the world, Here nothing is permanent,

Sex Is ice Love is water NO SEX IS RICE WATER IS RED WINE BOTH ARE NEEDED TO PRODUCE A PROGENY KEH DID MANY I THINK SANTS ETC AND NOW YOU PG JI

Excellent poem. I liked it. Love is the deepest motivation to connect the center to the circumference of the heart.