Monday, September 7, 2020

Perception Comments

Rating: 4.5

The desires of the heart are getting worse
And I'm getting hands-on
In this desolate city of the night
I am walking
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Shakira Nandini
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Khairul Ahsan 07 September 2020

'Shakira has not changed at all' - No harm changing, if the change is for the better.

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M Asim Nehal 07 September 2020

There is always a tug of war between the love and and the encroachment happens when desires overrules the decency. A thoughtful poem.10++++ I invite you to read my poems. Thx.

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 September 2020

I am walking Despite being unfaithful to me, I am lighting the lamp of memories Anxiety also increases As the shadows fade Expression of inner turmoil. tony

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