Seconds, minutes, hours, and day
Like grains of golden sand
Phew! ! they creep away!
And I am made to understand
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I really love this poem because I think it's one of your best! ! ! :)
Thanks a lot! ! ! ! I am pleased that you liked my work! ! ! ! :)
Well written indeed. Please feel free to comment/rate/criticize my work as well.
Thank you Dave; getting appreciation from you is really something for me! ! ! ! such a fan of your talent! ! !
@Salema thank you very much; but your poem is really outstanding; an idea of an idea.....cann't express how much i liked it! ! ! !
a very nice flow in the poem good poem..indeed i like the poem...read my poem you may like them tooo
Very beautiful and well written. :)