Wednesday, March 17, 2010

Perception Comments

Rating: 5.0

Perceiving the smell of spring in the air
My mind has slipped.
Not for chasing golla ice cream man
of the noon of summer
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Nazma Lucky
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Ramesh Rai 01 April 2012

nice, xlent, i like it. well composed. good job

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Saadat Tahir 22 July 2010

stirrings of spring and desire intertwine in tender shoots....wistfully rise to clutch at hopes and wants.... meaningful cheers

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C. P. Sharma 02 April 2010

It is the power of perception that is mine Why to view life through others and pine? CP

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Chitra - 18 March 2010

a different take on life's seasons...unique in perception!

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