for some reason people are drawn to me
they comment on the way i look
like there looking at the cover of a glistning book
but instead of reading the blurbs
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yet when deciphering the code of love, clear crystals of the soul by the passion, deasire when waits the breath betiding over the lips of silence when bestirs....................thought of love cohered looking from the distance, wonderful queries by the passion, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing
Nice piece, dear Natalie. Your poem leads us into the heart of contemporary problems. Keep on working in this direction. Give us more of your talent. I give it a 9+ as a starting poem. I will follow tour progres. You have a future in poetry. Go! Joseph Josephides Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded